WALT: Show not tell.
WALT: Use lots of verbs.
I heaved myself up the beautiful wooden ladder, the beautiful soft amazing and warm bed. The pillows were like a white puffy cloud under head but the pillows were not white they were pillows of amazing colours. The blankets were warm and fuzzy around me as I lay down with my eyes shut tightly, it was the most comfiest bed EVER, the beautiful feeling of a fluffy cloud under my head (the pillow.) The bed was so warm with its colorful blankets and their were so many pillows.
